No doubt you have heard about web copywriters who charge
as much $5,000 (and sometimes more) to write effective sales
copy. Are they worth it? You bet they are.
If you need sales copy for your own site and don’t
have years to invest in learning how to do it, you’re
best bet is to hire a copywriter. If your budget won’t
allow that then you need to gain some copywriting skills
and do it quickly.
Let's take a look at a “before” and “after”
scenario. By the way, this is a “real life”
example, only the name was changed in deference to the site
owner.
BEFORE
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JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS is an e-mail options service that
has been called one of the best advisory services. JOHN
DOE INVESTMENTS uses a unique system to find options under
accumulation by smart money
This system compares the volume of an option to the open
interest. When volume exceeds open interest by a specific
ratio, it could be a sign of accumulation by knowledgeable
investors.
JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS uses a combination of technical and
fundamental analyses and listens to what the market is telling
us. And while past performance is not a guarantee of future
results, we have had 10 WINNERS OUT OF OUR LAST 12 CLOSED
TRADES. There is no need to be watching the market during
the day.
What would you pay for one of the best options service
- a service that has produced REAL TRIPLE DIGIT PROFITS?
The cost of the service is:
(1) $5 per month subscription fee, and;
(2) 5% of the profits from each trade we are successful
on
Some examples of previous trades JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS have
been correct on are:
TRADE/PROFITS
Price Communication 75%, Biovail 100%, Oracle 300% , Teletech
350%, Intel 157%, SQLBE 100%, SXQDC 200 %, SCIX 125%, FFTI
75%
Please e-mail us your e-mail address and mailing address
since you will be notified by e-mail that we have received
your funds. The mailing address is for shipment of your
receipt.
For contact, my e-mail address is
johndoe@johndoinvestments.com
To limit cost, as well as to prevent fraud, we do not accept
credit cards.
WE ONLY ACCEPT CHECKS, MONEY ORDERS, AND BANK DRAFTS.
Please make your funds payable and send to:
JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS
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AFTER
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"How to buy options stocks with the strongest earnings
and price momentum"
Dear Friend,
Learn how to...select 10 WINNERS OUT OF 12 CLOSED TRADES.
Hold a trade from 1 week to a maximum of 7 months with profit
targets ranging from 30 to 300% or more.
If this sounds good to you, then this might be the most
important letter you'll ever read.
Here's why:
JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS is an e-mail options service. Our
"Unique System Finds Options Under Accumulation By
Smart Money".
Now, I know you're probably skeptical. That's normal, but
let me give you three good reasons we can back up what we
claim:
Three Reasons To Believe What I Say
Reason one: Take a look at our track record
TRADE/PROFITS
Price Communication 75%, Biovail 100%, Oracle 300% , Teletech
350%, Intel 157%, SQLBE 100%, SXQDC 200 %, SCIX 125%, FFTI
75%
Reason two: Unlike most newsletters, JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS
does not throw 20-30 trades at you each week. In fact, because
of the high standards that our trades must meet, we average
1-2 trades per month. Each trade is held from 1 week to
a maximum of 7 months with profit targets ranging from 30
to 300% or more.
Reason three: My clients are primarily professional people.
. . lawyers, doctors and politicians. All seeking my advice,
so you know you are in good company
Here is a summary of the benefits you receive:
Weekly options service
Buy options only on stocks with strongest earnings and price
momentum
Special alerts
Avoid costly mistakes take advantage of great tips
Arrives every weekend
Plan your weekly trading
Provides the right information at the right time
No more guesswork
Cost effective
Save precious hours
Now, you're probably wondering how we can do this.
Let me explain.
JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS uses a unique system to find options
under accumulation by "smart money". This system
compares the volume of an option to the open interest.
When volume exceeds open interest by a specific ratio,
it could be a sign of accumulation by "knowledgeable
investors". And while past performance is not a guarantee
of future results, we have had 10 WINNERS OUT OF OUR LAST
12 CLOSED TRADES.
Don't take my word for it. Listen to what our customers
say.
"this is the first time I used your service to make
a trade. I bought long puts at $1.00 and sold them for $1.90
for EMC. I want to thank you." JOH
"I bought (EMC June 35 puts) at 1.910 and sold at
4.20. Thanks for the recommendation." RW
" I am dizzy. This is my first month with JOHN DOE
INVESTMENTS ( let's just say that it's not going to be my
last). I got in at 0.75 and sold at $4.30 - over 500% profit.
I don't know how to thank you. This is amazing. And the
best part? I did it in 7 business days. I love you man."
JK.
Okay, that sounds pretty good, BUT: Do NOT buy JOHN DOE
INVESTMENTS unless it meets the following 6 criteria for
you.
There’s a lot of confusion surrounding our field.
I want to give you 6 criteria or elements you absolutely,
positively must have in any solution you obtain:
One: Eliminates the guesswork.
Two: Gives you a precise entry and exit point.
Three: Compares the volume of an option to the open interest
Four: Does not throw 20-30 trades at you each week
Five: Arrives via email
Six: Gives you special alerts
You get at least 10 times your money's worth!
Similar reports cost anywhere from $70-99 a month. We've
seen some as high as $1000 a year or more and with far less
content!
What is your time worth? What you save in time, money and
frustration is worth 10 or 20 times more than the low monthly
fee for our service.
In summary, here's what you get:
Weekly options service
Buy options only on stocks with strongest earnings and price
momentum
Special alerts
Avoid costly mistakes take advantage of great tips
Arrives every weekend
Plan your weekly trading
Provides the right information at the right time
No more guesswork
Cost effective
Save precious hours
Low monthly fee
If you respond right away, you pay only $50 per month!
Act immediately and receive the following offer
Since I know it's 100% to your benefit to act right away,
I want to sweeten the pot and give you every possible reason
to say YES today! If you respond immediately, you'll also
receive the following:
First week absolutely FREE
You can't lose with our 100%, ironclad, moneyback guarantee
By the way, the reports are yours to keep even in the unlikely
event you decide to take advantage of our ironclad moneyback
guarantee:
"Your satisfaction is assured through our no risk,
you-can't-lose, 100%, no-questions-asked, iron-clad money
back guarantee. If for any reason, you aren't thrilled and
satisfied with our product, just contact us within your
first 30 days and we'll refund 100% of your purchase price.
No hard feelings."
"What I'm saying is, don't decide now if this product
is for you. Just get it and try it out. If it doesn't do
everything I say and more, if you don't save money, time
and frustration, if it isn't life-changing, if it doesn't
work for you, you have nothing to worry about because you
can get every dime of your money back under our no-loopholes
guarantee. So you have nothing to lose and everything to
gain."
Here's how to order right now!
Special First Month Offer $38.47
1 month subscription $50.00
3-month subscription $100.00
6-month subscription $175.00
12-month subscription $300.00
24-month subscription $500.00
We do not accept credit card payments because of the possibility
of fraud.
Please make your checks payable to JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS
and mail to:
JOHN DOE INVESTMENTS
To your success,
John Doe
P.S. "Remember, the offer for one free week is limited.
I can only guarantee you'll receive that if you order right
away. So don't delay. Act now while it's fresh on your mind."
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This site owner was getting a tremendous amount of traffic
to his site, however, his logs show that viewers were clicking
away within two to five seconds.
Read before and after carefully and see if you can pick
out all the differences. It's an interesting exercise.
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enclude the resource box at the bottom of each page.
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